Im so excited my book is now writen and Ive already got a cover design. More big news, just managed to get a hold of my editor yesterday, and as excited as he is about the new book, he made it very clear to me that I have a lot of work to do. National Novel Writing Month is only two months away and If I hope to start on my next novle in time to participate I am going to have to really nuckle down. Still not decided on which book I want to work on for the compitition but Im leaning more towards my sci-fi story. One way or another my priority right now is to finish The Dragon and The Onion Girl
The Changes to expect In The Dragon and The Onion Girl
Amung the most dramatic changes comming is to chapter ones structure and pacing. That should take me a bit as is. Next is my anatagonist, he is getting changed. I have also gotten a lot of sincere feedback from people telling me that most of the story Greta tells in chapter 2 comes off as a little preachy, so another big focus is cutting it down and making it seam a little less out of left feild. Probobly one of the hardest things im likly going to have to do however is a cut chapter 6 and merge it with chapter 7. Still talking this over with my editor but Im willing to make sacrifices for the story. One of the less hard things we are going to do is flush out and take care of all the lose ends I didnt resolve by the end of the last chapter. We found at least 9 big ones.